Type in the content of your page here. The Case of the Missing Chocolate Bar
By Box Man
“Somebody help me my chocolate bar has been stolen” yelled
Bow.
I heard Bow yelling as I came around the corner. I asked him if he know who would have stolen the Mars chocolate bar.
He said, “Probably someone really fast.” We thought it must be the fastest person in town which is Firethroat.
I decide to go visit Firethroat to ask if she stole the missing chocolate
bar. As I walked through the door I see the apartment is full of empty chocolate bar wrappers. It looked like she hadn't cleaned in months.
Firethroat told me that she had never stolen the chocolate bar. As I turned to leave , I looked back and I saw a Mars bar sticking out of her pocket. I yelled, “Your lying”!...
solution:
It was the Mars bar in her pocket that solved the case because she had the Mars bar sticking out of her pocket. That is how we found was bows chocolate bar.
Hello Boxman this is stopwatch. I really like the vocabulary and how you rather show than tell.
The Alien Abductions
By
Stopwatch Hello my name is Stopwatch and this is my partner Mr. Waddles we are heading for my grandma's house in the country, after getting a worried call from her. Somehow her chickens,cows, and rabbits keep on disappearing in the night. As we pulled in to the driveway I saw a shadow moving in the corner of my eye in the distance. When we were inside she told use how there was a green light then the weird sounds then her cows or chickens would float away. The more I listened the more complicated it sounded. After we were done talking Mr. Waddles and I went out to check the foundation and the barn. There we found a silent generator hooked up to green lights and a music box. When I played the music it sounded like weird aliens. I sent Mr. Waddles to look up the gangs in the area and he found two gangs that stage alien abductions in this area. The two gangs were F.O.B (first off the boat) and U.F.O s stealth gang. After inspecting the area I found more clues. The mini crane and the cages small enough for chickens.
After researching some more we knew that U.F.O s stealth gang was responsible for the abductions. One of the gang members were caught and told us that the gang who did it had a F and a O in there name and it was known as the Alien Abductors and had a bad reputation. Mr. Waddles and I set out to our friend named Cole who just happened to be a gang member when we got there we knew he didn't know but of course he knew and he was a member of F.O.B.
The Case of the Missing Chocolate Bar
By Box Man
“Somebody help me my chocolate bar has been stolen” yelled
Bow.
I heard Bow yelling as I came around the corner. I asked him if he know who would have stolen the Mars chocolate bar.
He said, “Probably someone really fast.” We thought it must be the fastest person in town which is Firethroat.
I decide to go visit Firethroat to ask if she stole the missing chocolate
bar. As I walked through the door I see the apartment is full of empty chocolate bar wrappers. It looked like she hadn't cleaned in months.
Firethroat told me that she had never stolen the chocolate bar. As I turned to leave , I looked back and I saw a Mars bar sticking out of her pocket. I yelled, “Your lying”!...
solution:
It was the Mars bar in her pocket that solved the case because she had the Mars bar sticking out of her pocket. That is how we found was bows chocolate bar.
Hello Boxman this is stopwatch. I really like the vocabulary and how you rather show than tell.
The Alien Abductions
By
Stopwatch
Hello my name is Stopwatch and this is my partner Mr. Waddles we are heading for my grandma's house in the country, after getting a worried call from her. Somehow her chickens,cows, and rabbits keep on disappearing in the night. As we pulled in to the driveway I saw a shadow moving in the corner of my eye in the distance. When we were inside she told use how there was a green light then the weird sounds then her cows or chickens would float away. The more I listened the more complicated it sounded. After we were done talking Mr. Waddles and I went out to check the foundation and the barn. There we found a silent generator hooked up to green lights and a music box. When I played the music it sounded like weird aliens. I sent Mr. Waddles to look up the gangs in the area and he found two gangs that stage alien abductions in this area. The two gangs were F.O.B (first off the boat) and U.F.O s stealth gang. After inspecting the area I found more clues. The mini crane and the cages small enough for chickens.
After researching some more we knew that U.F.O s stealth gang was responsible for the abductions. One of the gang members were caught and told us that the gang who did it had a F and a O in there name and it was known as the Alien Abductors and had a bad reputation. Mr. Waddles and I set out to our friend named Cole who just happened to be a gang member when we got there we knew he didn't know but of course he knew and he was a member of F.O.B.
Which one is It
F.O.B or U.F.O